Thread:Bugthe/@comment-26247132-20160531050025/@comment-28398720-20160601024622

That because roleback is only intended for vandalism. You could have undone the changes you disagreed with, or just used the edit button to fix the few issue and improve the entry. Anyway, while I see what you mean in general, I don't necessarily agree with all points. For example:


 * They are not "primitive;"

I didn't said they were primitives, I said they had primitive lifestyle. If you believe that this needs further explanation then you should write it. An explanation on what led to their use of primitive weapons and technology, being illiterate, having no economy\production to speak of, etc and overall being case back to the dark ages would be in imporvment. You might want to use this


 * To use "hostile" (and other subjective wording), it needs to be explained, especially because their hostility toward the Sky People is justified since they're invaders.

Its an overview of Grounder culture, which spans many decades over hundreds of miles landscape with a verity of people. We know some clans are more pacifist while others are more hostile. We know that hostilities have taken place among the clans long before the hundred came down to earth.

Considering that I haven't even got to Sky people, nor they are mentioned in the grounder history section... I think it was a concise summary to start with. I don't mind using your line, but if you think it needs further explanation because of Sky people then do it.