Talk:Arkadian Civil War/@comment-28398720-20170306050009

I feel that some details has very little relevance and need to be trimmed, while others aren't mentioned at all.

For example :
 * "Bellamy turns on Pike and turns a gun on him. Bellamy calls for the grounders in the blockade informing them that they have Pike who they come to retrieve. In the scuffle, Octavia kills Shawn Gilmer in vengeance and the grounders take Pike. Before the grounders leave with Pike, Kane asks to accompany them to the Polis."

Does Octavia actions has any bearing on the course of the Arkadian Civil War? How about something like that:


 * "At the blockade line Bellamy betrays Pike and hold him at gunpoint. Having Octavia translate to the Grounders stationed there, he handed Pike over in exchange for lifting the blockade."

Also the aftermath instead of jumping to Polis:
 * "'After Pike was defeated, Kane escorted him to Polis with other grounders to take to the new commander. When they arrived, however, A.L.I.E. had brainwashed most of the Grounders/Sky People to fight for her.''"

should mentioned the effect of what happened on Arkadia, that ALIE took over things while they were fighting each other.