Board Thread:Character Discussion/@comment-28398720-20160530203022/@comment-28398720-20160601195730

Nice I like it. Here are some very minor nitpicks.

>which he took to heart by attempting to assassinate the Chancellor in order to join Octavia

I think you skipped a few bits there. Since 6, he had no life of his own, it was all about protecting his sister and their secret. This secret which kept him from having a normal childhood, made his mother trade sex favors. And he was expected to sacrifice the rest of his life i.e. no wife, no kids of his own just take care of this grown woman under the floor..

Then when he tries to give her first night of normalcy and freedom, he was caught and everything he ever knew was taken away from him. Which he almost certainly blamed himself for.

I think this is a crucial piece of background that people tend to glance over when considering his actions, and should be emphasized.

>Unaware of the dire air shortage on the Ark, Bellamy figures out a way to maintain his freedom by making it appear that the Delinquents are dying.

I prefer my rough version only for the mention of the murder. Because of the whole 'who we are and who we have to be'. He isn't a murder as we seen with Clarke the mercy killer, and it layed heavy on him and set his course of action for the next few days.