Thread:TotallyTinkerbell/@comment-25205238-20170601214356/@comment-7971816-20170602163451

the first one makes it sound like Praimfaya was a building that got destructed, not the cause of it.

The second one is just way to complex for what you're trying to say:

Five years after Praimfaya, Clarke and Madi were the only survivors above ground as the earth began to be habitable again for non-nightbloods. During this time, there were 7 survivors in space, and 1200 people still in the bunker. Another year later, the Gagarin, commissioned by the Eligius Corporation, descended towards the Green Valley.