Thread:Janus100/@comment-28398720-20161014121645/@comment-27794543-20161015083919

I copyedited/reworded the entire section. Hopefully it looks better. You can also ask Amethystkitten to go through it, she's better than me at fine-tuning the language.

As you may have noticed, I've been [mostly] absent for the last five days (and may continue to be so ...), thus I haven't been going through recent changes like I typically do. If there is anything you need my assistance with or think I should look at, please let me know here on my wall.